This service is very convenient especially living on a college campus, definitely is a hassle leaving the scooter in the shop for days !! Imagine having to walk everywhere or uber causing you to spend extra money after you’ve already invested in the scooter. This is a money maker at the fact that this is a on sight service. It would be rare to find that on campus and when we do it would definitely have a huge market on campus. Love you idea !
Your pitch sounds natural. I can tell you have experience with this issue, and you've done the research into what is important to those looking to have their scooters fixed. You did stutter and use crutch words a few time, but definitely not any more than the coffee cup pitch from our examples. I would use this service. Good job!
Hi Riley, I have to say I am genuinely impressed with your elevator pitch. You were able to convey your message effectively and in a professional manner. Having an effective elevator pitch is essential for marketing a product. Having a useful and effective product is a major part of having an effective elevator pitch. Your scooter repair service is the perfect product to deliver an elevator pitch on.
Hey Riley, I think your elevator went well for the first one. you explained your idea really well, and the issues you are trying to solve. I would just encourage you to loosen up a bit, which is something i struggled with myself. I feel just relaxing and such would help speaking easier and less of a struggle. I get extremely nervous and start stuttering personally.
Riley,
ReplyDeleteThis service is very convenient especially living on a college campus, definitely is a hassle leaving the scooter in the shop for days !! Imagine having to walk everywhere or uber causing you to spend extra money after you’ve already invested in the scooter. This is a money maker at the fact that this is a on sight service. It would be rare to find that on campus and when we do it would definitely have a huge market on campus. Love you idea !
Riley,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch sounds natural. I can tell you have experience with this issue, and you've done the research into what is important to those looking to have their scooters fixed. You did stutter and use crutch words a few time, but definitely not any more than the coffee cup pitch from our examples. I would use this service. Good job!
Hi Riley,
ReplyDeleteI have to say I am genuinely impressed with your elevator pitch. You were able to convey your message effectively and in a professional manner. Having an effective elevator pitch is essential for marketing a product. Having a useful and effective product is a major part of having an effective elevator pitch. Your scooter repair service is the perfect product to deliver an elevator pitch on.
Hey Riley, I think your elevator went well for the first one. you explained your idea really well, and the issues you are trying to solve. I would just encourage you to loosen up a bit, which is something i struggled with myself. I feel just relaxing and such would help speaking easier and less of a struggle. I get extremely nervous and start stuttering personally.
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